Friday, November 13, 2009

(Before I even start this blog/segment I want to express my respect to the author. I am claiming to be no star reporter myself so please do not be offended or angered by what I have typed).

I can certainly agree that the health care reform is coming to a boiling point. Sooner or later Americans will know weather to blow a vessel or submit to change in health care all together . The newest battle now is weather or not to adopt a single payer health care system, which in my opinion would help the nation a a whole.
Although I found this article very interesting. It left me somewhat confused. This article posed somewhat a nonchalant attitude towards the subject of health care. I think this could have been a more effective article if a clear and strong stance would have been taken either against or toward the health care system. First, the author says the issue of illegal immigrants is "nagging". Then he says there is a need for immigration reform. Then he says denying in some to illegals would be wrong. A clear stance would have helped the reader determine whether or not he/she agrees with the author's point of view but, if the reader is not able to form a stance, they are forced to make accusations sometimes false about the author's intended view of the subject.
The title of this article left me confused. I never found a connection in the article that corresponded to "How Dare I", which I'm assuming needs an exclamation mark. Wording in the article like rather than, illegals precluded from health care could be rewritten as illegals being precluded from health care. As I said in the beginning, I found this article very interesting and I am no journalist, this is simply a comment.

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